Good research into different film openings (need to link to what you have learned. Some good audience profiling.
There is good organisation of actors, locations, costumes and props.
Moodboard etc is there but not explained.
It feels as though in changing our mind over the film planning still has a long way to go.
At the moment your mark is 11/20 which is a D because of what is missing (see below).
Target: Shotlists and storyboarding / animatic
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